What is your opinion?
Unique and very interesting. The punishments were hard to read and seemed like forever but it turned out well, I was literally crying at the end. Love it, love it...
"Unique and very interesting. The punishments were hard to read and seemed like forever but it turned out well, I was literally crying at the end. Love it, love it..."
LOVE IT!!!
"I absolutely love this story! Your writing style is easy to read and flows nicely. I only saw a few simple spelling/grammar issues as I read but besides that it was error free. I love the imaginative spin you put on the story, it makes it very original. I can't wait to read more of your books like Mortema!"
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"THIS IS BEST THING I'VE EVER RIDE. I'M SO PROUD FO U WEEOIGJEJGJADOFGH"
Different!!!
"Going to be popular....best wishes!!!"
So Good It's Deadly
"It's a good story. Despite some chapters not being there leaving holes in the story. The author does a good job of creating a new image for the afterlife"
An afterlife story
"I liked it, but I do think you have room to improve. While this idea is good, it isn't something I'd drop everything to read. I'm no scholar and I can't exactly tell you what is upset, but going through it again would help. Admittedly, I'm referring mainly to the first 8 chapters or so and I don't know how it progresses. All in all, it's good. A good story, and an interesting idea which could use some work."
Mortemer
"I think the plot just wasnt to my interest. I did not finish ready. The thought of after life was interesting enough but the spin of the character being judged wrong jyst didnt sit well with me and I lost interest. I assume she was found innocent eventually. "
