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What is your opinion?
Awesome, but sometimes confusing
"Overall the story idea is amazing! The concept is great and how you present it really appeals to me. The only downside is that I sometimes can not figure out who says what or does what. Sometimes it's a guessing game. If you improve on that part you could elevate your work immensely."
Unique
"This was a new twist on the block! The color representing super powers was quite a good idea and how you had put it across was just right. It is easy to understand and despite using simple language, the work stood out. Keep going! You're doing good!"
