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Onslaught: The bluest beginnings

Summary

Derrick Onslaught was a bright and kind boy. But when tragedy strikes him he is a hero of his country. >>>>> red kills. brown steals. green revives. But blue controls.

Status
8yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

The strange dream

I was having one of the best dreams ever that day. I was on the ocean dancing with water spirits, speaking to the north wind and feeding the sharks. But all this ended with my hands glowing a strong tint blue. Soon they went on fire and evaporated the water. I soon was teleported into a hospital. I went to the main hall. My arms were on fire again. Soon I heard the smoke alarm go off. I got dizzy and fell.

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