What is your opinion?
One of the best books I've read in a long time!
"Normally here in this app I have found many books that I didn't finish and they were either boring or they just were badly written but this book was so well written what I've read so far and the plot is just awesome and really keeps my interest. I haven't seen hardly any grammatical or spelling errors as well which is a big plus for me. I will definitely read other books by this author. "
Great story
"This novel was thrilling. Very descriptive, I could probably draw pictures of the landscapes and areas. Action packed as well. "
A Good One
"Thought this a grand science fiction story. A few hiccups with punctuation and grammar gave me pause. I otherwise ate it all up. At times funny, exciting, sexxxxy and emotionally touching. Had me chuckling or reacting: Oh no! You basxxxds! Entertaining. Looking forward to reading more from you."
Infernum
"First off I'd suggest eliminating the prologue and getting straight to the characters and their actions. There is no information relayed in the prologue that couldn't be better, and less intrusively referenced within the meat of the story through dialogue and brief narrative bursts of background as they relate to current developments. Some creative disbursement of exposition would also enhance the mystery of the world the author is describing by revealing its workings.more gradually. Giving all the information about the world before the reader has had a chance to get engaged with the motivations and conflicts of the main characters makes it more likely important exposition is forgotten further on. The author appears to have a distinct vision of the world he wants to convey and is not lacking for imaginative ideas. On the technical side I noticed the author consistently placing periods at the end of quoted statements and then continuing that sentence outside of the quotation marks (sometimes the first word capitalized). Examples: "What are those things?" The man asked Drust. "We know them as Daemons; they are a plague on this galaxy." He answered. "That's all of them... That is all that is left." It said."
