The Life of a Wolf
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The Life of a Wolf

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Summary

tossed and turned ripped left and right I believed myself a savior of life in reality all I did was give mine and as one life ended, a new one began. A compilation of poems given birth to by a wolf, his recordings of life, and love for romanticism...

Genre
Poetry
Author
Mysticwolf
Status
Complete
Chapters
10
Rating
4.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

The Beauty of Nature

The Beauty of Nature

She asks me how nature is beautiful

When it causes earth quakes and tremors

How can I live a life that is rich and full

When we constantly hide in terror

How can nature be serene

While her mother makes scorpions and snakes

How can it claim to be peaceful in its gleam

When it leaves destruction in its wake

How can nature be calm

With it’s tornados and twisters

How can we enjoys the birds sweet songs

With natures’ bees, the killer

Again she asks, how can nature be beautiful

And I simply reply, because she made you.

Let Mysticwolf know what you thought about this chapter!

John
John

pretty cool

8 years
Kellie Thomson Braesch
Kellie Thomson Braesch

I would consider using some more punctuation. I think it would help define the importance of certain phrases/lines. The line "How can it claim to be peaceful in its gleam" gleam doesn't make sense to me. Here's a synonym to try to show you why it doesn't seem right to me, "peaceful in its shine." I really like the idea of this poem, everyone says nature is beautiful but look at all the destruction it causes but it then turns around and says look at the beauty that comes from it. The process of a man becoming a wolf is destructive but the end product is beautiful.

7 years

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