Fascinating

"The opening chapter was very interesting, and as a reader I could not deduct exactly what the setting for the book was. If it was a more poetic venture or perhaps a literal meaning something similar to a surreal world like Alice in wonderland. I was glad to see it being the latter as we follow Crimson for all intents and purposes keep having these visions/dreams. Without spoiling the ending it did not come with slight shock that her 'predicament' was so. I know this is a short story and you have to fit in a plot and senses for the reader. I still think you can reach further if you instill more imagery to immerse the readers. It is good now but it can be great. type of scenario. There were a few very minor grammar errors such as a misspelled word but nothing major. All in all fascinating read."