What is your opinion?
What it is is brilliant!
"You are uniquely able to drive the story forward rapidly, adding to the addictive and captivating nature of the story, without it being perceived as rushed. Not an easy balance act to maintain, so very nicely done! I love that you show the emotional struggle, progression and boundary pushing of their physical relationship and the way you are able to depict the complex mindset, emotions and anxiety of a teenage girl in this situation impressed the hell out of me actually. A great writer is able to push you out of your comfort zone, bring tears to your eyes at times, make you feel agony at times and happiness at times. A great writer forces you to open your mind, open your eyes and senses, enabling you to view the world just slightly clearer. I can't find the words to tell you how impressed I am with your work with this entire spectacular story."
It is what it is - Fantastic Young Japril Story
"You write young Japril simply beautifully. The emotional angst is so palpable that you feel like getting into the story and smacking Jackson upside the head for giving in to peer pressure and in doing so ruining her reputation. However, I love the evolution of the characters - Jackson grew so much as a person, well both of them really and I especially love April's strength and maturity after her "breakup" with him. Also beautiful was that love slowly crept onto them and after forgiving each other's mistakes they allowed it into their lives. Obviously sexual attraction was there first, but the getting to know each other and falling for that person was simply divinely penned. What happened to April was heartbreaking. I would have wanted her to stand up to the abuse but I understand totally how you wrote her. Her insecurities made her an easy target and that's how the teacher exploited her. Very relatable plot. Generally all round kudos on a fantastic story."
