Broken Apart
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Broken Apart

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Summary

“if you beat me then I won’t make IT happen” the devil says as he plays with his tail. This story is about a half human half wolf girl who can change into almost anything, she may seem all sweet and cute, but she has a bad side, when she was in the forest with her family a hunter killed them, that's when IT happened, her eyes represent her emotions, she meets a tall boy the same age as her and they bond, until Serena comes along, then she meets kai, she is trying to try new things, and is trying to control it, but its hard when everyone wants to kill her kind, she is the last of her kind, will she be captured or will she die, or will she find the love of her life, or will IT take over?

Status
8yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

I feel heat as I hear a voice “ Violet…Violet..” I open my eyes and see the devil. I sit up and say “P-Please don’t make IT happen” I try to hold in my tears and say “even though you can control me..you can’t see what I am or what I am doing." “if you beat me then I won’t make IT happen” the devil says as he plays with his tail. “ O-Ok” I say scared. He teleports us to a arena, the arena had blood all over it, there were spikes with bodys on them. My ears and tail go down as he says “ i’ll make the first move, I am the king after all” I growl loudly, he runs at me super fast, he then turns invisible.


I start to talk as I see his footprints on the ground “you know that you don’t everything about me” I then close my eyes but can see him, he starts to run to me to stab me while he says “ TIME TO DIE”. I see this with my eyes closed and teleport behind him, I open my eyes, they turn dark red, I start to float, my teeth get sharp as my nails grow longer and thicker. Sharp teeth like things come out of my spine. I lower myself to the ground, and look at him, once again my good and bad side wanted to kill someone. He looked at me trying not to act scared.


I walk up to him and touch his face as I say “ NO, IT’S TIME FOR YOU TO DIE”I then grab his arm and rip it off, he looks at me terrified, as I eat his arm viciously. I rip out his heart and eat it, with the last of his strength he says “ y-you know it always goes my way,..now you are the..the… new..d-devil.” I eat his body as I think to myself “what does he mean new devil?” For the first time the evil side stopped itself, I start to walk out of the arena as I feel a pain all over my body. I fall to the ground screaming and crying from the pain. I see a handsome boy walking up to me with a smirk on his face as he says “so your the one who beat my father huh… pathetic” I faint as I see him examining me.

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