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The Hunted One

"I love this story line. I am really looking forward to how the author finishes developing the plot."

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The Hunted One

"I really love this story. It has more excitement in it than I’m used to reading. And to find out she has a sister? That’s good for her. Now vampires. Wow!! I’m excited for the next chapters. Please update soon. "

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Miscongeniality

"It's fascinating. Even more so because it contains a tangent off the usual line of werewolf stories. A huge jump from the normal pattern and really well done as to keep one interested. A bit of familial touch here and there to drown you in depression (Lanie's original pack story) and now with the "Creator Mother and Piper, her sister gives her another chance of being part of her own family a bit like having her "original" family back."

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The Hunted one

"Loved it. A little disappointed that it ended so soon. "

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Good read

"So far an interesting read. Hope there’s more to come "

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Great story !!!

"It’s just really getting good and I run out of chapters 😭🥓🥓🥓🥓🥞🥞🥞🥞 Thanks for writing this for us to read !!!! "

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The hunted one

"This is really good can't wait for the next chapter "

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The hunted one

"It's awesome nice characters interesting plot"

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opinion

"wonderful story i love it"

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Like it

"story is good. But too many things happening in one is not too good"

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more updates

"a little sad that the updates are so long"

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