What is your opinion?
You took what was his now he's coming
"Great book more please "
You took what was his now he is coming
"Very exciting!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
Need more
"Need more of story. Please update "
Great Read
"😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊"
You took what is his now he's coming
"Well just as good as the others. Thank you. "
You Took What Is His Now He’s Coming
"Wow please continue, wonderful book. Don’t keep us hanging to long. ❤️❤️"
You took what is his
"I’m enjoying this book "
MC Goodnesses
"Here is the thing. I loved the plot. Love the chacters. I like the break down of mini group stories. BUT I found it very confusing, as the the point of view and break down about who was whom during the story itself was hard to follow. Each new MC with it's own leader core was not intrduced in a way that made it clear enough about who did what to who. Include the small few errors in punctuation and grammar usage, made some chapters difficult to follow. "
You took his now he is coming
"It kept me on the edge to see what was going to happen next "
Book
"Enjoyable book "
This one good story i cant leave till i read she is wake.
"Does she wake up or did quie altogether leave him. I really like this story. I don't want him to leave. Please tell they are bavk together. "
Next chapter plz
"Next chapter plz"
You Took What Is His Now He's Coming...
"I love this story for it shows how she over came heart break from a boy in whom cheated on her and she caught him in the act I'm doing it .She also helped a young who being assaulted . This story is a winner . ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐"
My name is Knuckles
"At least this story gives you some idea of who is speaking sometimes but the punctuation is horrible. Needs lots of editing! Figures it would end on a cliff hanger. The story line is OK but it jumps all over the place and ends up not being about Knuckles at all. He becomes a side character. Maybe should have been titled the MC's club name."
You Took What Is His Now He's Coming For You
"I really liked the plot and in general, liked the story and characters. However, I think it was very confusing when there wasn't a clear indication of who was speaking. Therefore, sometimes it was hard to read the story and keep up with it. But I think with little editing and a few changes, the story could be easier to read. :)"
Awesome read 👍
"I like what I'm reading so far can't wait for the next upcoming chapters "
Knuckles
"Your punctuation and grammar needs work"
You Took What Is His Now He's Coming For You
"I like the characters I'd recommend this to anyone enthusic about bikers I choose this cause I thought it's a good rating. "
You took what was his now he’s coming for you
"The plot was excellent. The writing style is hard to follow as everyone speaks in first person and there is no clear change in speaker. Fine tuning those points will make the story flow better. "
