"A bet? I gave myself up for what? A few hundred dollars cash?" I asked angrily. "I'm sorry" he mumbled. I exhaled shakily, "I hate you Caleb" Olivia mendall was just a normal senior in high school. She was a good kid, but at the wrong place at the wrong time. Caleb Zion Kuwonu had a dare/bet with his friends that he could get her in bed. When he does the truth comes out, but it was too late, she'd already fallen in love...But did he?
When was I going to realize he didn't care? That I was another toy, he'd play with, then get bored of. Max even told me, "Don't do it", "Don't fall in love". And what did I do? I ignored him. I told myself he changed. I gave him chance after chance. But every time he managed to make me look stupid. I was the one loving him and caring. Everything he's told me...were lies. The 'I love you's, I miss you's"
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C.: Ich habe so oft herzhaft gelacht. Was für eine tolle Geschichte. So schön geschrieben. So schön, flüssig lesbar. Ich lieb‘s. Mir tun die Herren in der Geschichte fast leid, die Frauen sind reine Naturgewalten. Lustig, verschmitzt, offen, direkt. So schön. Danke für diese Geschichte und das wir sie l...
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Obsidian: He's hilarious. Like, actually. I loved it. You're writing style is great, although you could do with a few less murmurs and mutters. I know it sounds critical, but I have the same problem and I hate it. Overall, it was one of the best stories I've read on here so far. I liked it better than those M...
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