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Perfectly Written

"This story was heart-wrenching and beautifully written. I couldn't tear my eyes away from it. The writing skill was perfect. I loved every single bit from the first word to the last."

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Addictive

"I enjoyed every part of this story, I was so caught up in the story, I read it in one sitting. The characterization of Draco and Harry are spot on. A really good read, would recommend to any Drarry fan."

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A Review

"I think the characters really shone in this story, you did a good job of making them actually people. I do like the plot as well, it was well thought out, for the most part, if a little cliche in some of the biggest points. But, they are cliches for a reason and while it makes the plot a little predictable, it had a lot of heart. There were quite a few grammatical errors though, the best way to catch those is to read sentences aloud slowly while editing, or have someone read them to you aloud. All in all, it was a good story, I enjoyed reading it."

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