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Such a compelling story – couldn’t put it down!

"The story is super compelling. The plot moves along quickly and the pacing is great. The MC’s motivation is clear, but maybe some of the other supporting characters could’ve used a little more development?  There are moments of really beautiful descriptive writing. Some other areas could use refining in sentence structure and variety, and richness of description. Loving the book so far, though! "

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Good Story

"This is a pretty good story and I love survival novels"

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Jasper and the zombies

"Nothing…. Sooo good🥰🥰🥰"

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Fun novel

"Fantasically written. Been in search of a good zombie book for a while now. Score! Kudos to the author. Great job."

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Compelling plot with addictive chapters that make you keep flipping thru the pages.

"A must read horror story with each chapter sucking you in deeper. The plot is spectacular pulling you into the story. Kiddos to the author"

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A long walk:a journey through the zombie apocalypse

"I loved this book! Was an absolute great zombie- survival adventure, from the characters, especially the main ones,but I also liked the ones they ran into along the way, and even the villain, someone you love to hate. I wish Snow hadn't been killed though.ireally liked how the author described all the terrain they transverse, and the hardships endured.I would recommend this to any hoorror-zombie survival story lover.I chose this rating because I couldn't put it down.the only thing wanting was it moved to quick over the good parts and to slow over the boring parts."

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Horror at it's best

"Loved the story line and the dad's need to see that his daughter was safe. How you intertwined that horrid Robert into things as if the zombie's wasn't enough. Well, written, easy to follow, though never knew what was going to happen next. Not to gory. Character build was good. Could almost vision the characters at times. Sad situation. Good story. Hope to read more on this line. Keep up the good work."

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A long walk home

"Great book!"

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Great read!

"Grammar was a bit of in spite but, it flowed nicely. Very fast placed a great read. "

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Good

"Like it. Characters aren't very fleshed out though"

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Steve

"I really enjoyed the book please make more"

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A long walk

"Simply amazing. "

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Brutal, realistic and plain epic

"Shows the horror of zombies. But also how humans can be worse. A really great book! "

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A long walk a journey through

"I enjoyed the fact that it did not take long for the survivors to figure out what happened on the first day. And they used the info from movies to kill them...destroy the brain."

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Good

"Great story! You can broaden your audience by publishing your story on Novel Star Mobile App."

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Any chance that I could read the story to the end.

"No idea as it cut off half way through. "

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