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Offically Insane

"Valantina is the kind of female protagonist that is more interesting due to the fact the author embraces she's not a good person. The most interesting thing about her is her past relationship with the mysterious Alex who even the other members of the group seem unerved by. . Everyone in this book is part of some secret criminal organization so none of them are really good people but they do feel human to me. The plot is your standard revenge story but i'm still interested in seeing how this plays out. Especially since i think female characters being revenge driven by being thrown into prison in fiction is not something i see a lot with this type of story. The dialog is nothing to write home about its not very quotable and i wouldn't mention this except the authors often attempts to throw in lines that are supposed to seem deep like their meant to be the kind of lines your supposed to remember and the same line is repeated at least seven times. I've seen this mistake even with mainstream media just because a line fits your theme does not mean you have to have characters keep repeating it. That does not make the line more important but that's my only nitpick. While its still to early to tell its compelling enough that i'd recommend it for people who like revenge narratives and morally dubious characters."

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