What is your opinion?
C.O.R.A.
"A truly brilliant twist to the second chapter. We really enjoyed this story which gave new meaning to the concept of AI. The possibilities from here on in are endless, and we were sorry the story ended here. It could have gone on and on. Very well done."
Awesome sci-fi!
"Okay, I have to say, I loved this from beginning to end. From the word go, you keep the reader guessing, giving them just enough information to follow along but keeping them wanting more. The idea of the super-human type experiments is very interesting, and I want to know what happened in between the prologue and chapter one! I enjoyed the dialogue between CORA Prime and CORA 300, and I was surprised by Lucky and Fox. The description throughout the story isn't particularly flashy, but it functions well to create a pictures in the reader's mind. In my opinion, your writing leads more to the technical side of things, and I think that style fits in well with this type of story. I was so drawn into what was happening that I didn't pay a whole lot of attention to the writing itself. The only time I got a little lost was when Lucky and Fox were first introduced and talking behind the door. It was a little confusing, and I think it may have been because of the sparse dialogue tags. Anyway, I really enjoyed this, and I can't wait to see where it goes. Great work! :-)"
