Very solid start, keep it up!

"I do like the premise of your story: two lovers, torn apart for world peace and on an organisation's whims. And how they meet each other once more after an agonizingly long time. This can develop into quite a twisty tale, because people change throughout time, right? If I may add a small tip, however: I noticed you use a lot of the verb to say? But that verb gets a little bit... overused after a time. As you know, people don't just speak: they shriek, they answer, they ask, they babble, they groan, they grumble and mumble... Try to swap some of your 'to say' verbs with synonyms to give your character more depth without needing to use an extra sentence. And one more small tip: try to describe the environments your characters are in . Close your eyes and try to imagine the scene right in front of you: what do you see? Or what do you want your reader to notice? However, you do have a very good start and quite an intriguing plot. Keep it up and have fun writing your next chapter!"