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A Slave To His Whim

"A very erotic collection of stories. Greatly detailed and well written."

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Spicy!

"Loved it! Romantic and hot 🔥🥵❤️ If anyone is interested, I also wrote a romance/erotica called "Revenge and New Beginnings" "

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Forgot

"Very good book Short and sweet "

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Solid story!

"I really like the characters and wish I knew a little bit more even. It was written really well, and made me want to read more. I definitely wish there was more to this story or different stories, because it's one of the more compelling stories I read on this app"

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If you like bdsm, this is for you!!!

"Wonderful short story to read. Although I wished there was more romance. That way we understand the love connection these two characters have with one another. Awesome writing style, very descriptive. I’m very surprise this writer hasn’t written any other stories. I definitely would enjoy reading more of her work. 😊 *****SPOIL ALERT!!!***** I’m just curious, if “ Mr. Blue eyes” ever had other women, while he claimed she is his? Was he as loyal to her as she was to him? "

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Good book to read

"Good book to read"

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Nice

"I like it!!!!!!"

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Slave to his whim

"I enjoyed this thoroughly. I would live to see a part 2."

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A Slave to His Whims

"Nice and interesting short novel, it was great to read 😉"

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Beautifully hot

"Great hot short story. Following thus couples journey is interesting. None of the fluff just straight to their next meetings. Good plot. Simple and easy to read"

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Exhilarating

"Fast paced, unputdownable story. Everything makes sense, everything flows together naturally. The characters are hot and fun! Definitely worth reading"

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Unique style

"This is a great read. Her style is unique and unlike anything else I have seen before. Looked up her other works on Amazon already!"

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Really good

"I wasn’t a huge fan of the poems but to each his own!"

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Good

"Good so far"

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Wow what an amazing book!!

"I love reading at night when i have time! Defiantly was worth reading i love romance and erotica. Can't wait to read more of your books!! "

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Great book

"I’m new to erotica but this book really got me going 😉 I’ll definitely be checking out more of her work. "

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A slave to his whims what a story

"Wow is the first thing that comes to mind . Her writing style really brings these characters to life and makes you believe what’s going on . Definitely a hot read. The flow and speed of progression was good. I didn’t feel like it was rushed or if things were being too cluttered and out of place . I’m definitely going to read her other stories and add this to my late night reading ."

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A Slave to His Whims

"It got me going not that its particularly hard to do"

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Amazing and intense! Great experience 😆

"I just love how the story flows perfectly and has me in suspense feeling like I’m in the story. I literally couldn’t put it down..once I started reading I had to finish it and when it was over I was shocked at the intensity of the experience I had just had. All I could think was I can’t wait to read more from this author! I would recommend this book to any fan of erotica or anyone wanting to enhance their foreplay game...I kept thinking how hot it would be to read this with my partner before sex. I’m a forever fan now! ❤️🔥🔥🚬 "

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Sensual, quick read

"This story was absolutely scintillating, I am not too much of a reader, but her style really brings you in. The short stories are quick enough you can read them all in one sitting, or bit by bit, getting you excited and enthralled."

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