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Alpha Jake

"Great story so far."

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Alpha jake

"I love the first book and have read a few chapters of alpha jake and really looking forward to reading the rest"

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The Hiddens and Alpha Jake

"I really felt like these two stories didn't need to be separated unless it was done for some unknown reason. It simply felt like a continuation of "The Hiddens." I enjoyed the story line of the first book, but I found Jake to be a little much for me. His character came off as a spoiled brat that seemed to think his sh*t don't stink, and the world should be forced to pause and listen to him whine and moan. Jake is an irritating, festering, pustule on the ass of the world. He's got to go, or is character needs to come into some serious enlightenment in "Alpha Jake." Priscilla is no prize horse herself and she does come off as very haughty sometimes, but at least she has sympathy for others. I really wished that Priscilla could have had more time to get to know her Dad before he was killed. All in all, I thought the stories were well organized and thought-out. I liked that the chapters were not super wordy and drawn out. I think you writing style is great."

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Alpha jake

"I wish you would have wrote the next chapter where she and Jake had their comments about him picking Bella jzee. Make me want not read anymore"

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Good story

"Nicely story "

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Great work

"Great work "

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Alpha Jake

"I love it very much so far and can’t wait for an update. I am reading it on wattpad too and ‘am excited for more💕💕"

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Really unique story

"Yours plot is really different and interesting from others..I am in love with it❤"

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Witch & Lycan

"Omg. I love part 2. I can't stop reading it. Please update"

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Love it so far!

"Awesome story!"

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Love it

"I love it do much i cant stop reading at all"

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Alpha Jake

"I like the story. But I want to read more"

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Great story

"I am enjoying this story very much."

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Awesome reading can't wait for more

"I can not wait for more of this story it is so intriguing to read keeps listeners interested "

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I want him to suffer!

"I would like to rip his balls off! He's cruel and abusive, which goes against everything that a mate should be. He thinks of power only. Not love, not his mate. I'm sticking around to read this, because I'm really hoping he gets destroyed, or a huge dose of bad karma! Keep going! 😂"

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😁😁😁😁😁

"😘😘😘😘😘😘🤗🤩😘🤩🤩😘😍😍😘😍😘😘"

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Love jake

"So Carine is also a half wolf good change in story"

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Another waster of time

"It had promise till you have to pay extortionate price for the app. Not for me to pay apps, happy to pay authors. "

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Love

"I love this story so far but it's just pissing me off lol "

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Good story so far when is the new update

"When is the new update."

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