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"Nice,amazing,wonderful"
The Arghenns
"This book is really intriguing, I love the creativity you put into your work! I noticed that you do have a few grammar mistakes, and quite a few run-on sentences, but other than that the content and originality of your book is amazing and made it a very interesting read."
Good one
"I loved the story!It was nice to read something fresh in a while!It was very well written and I couldnt stop reading<3 It was amazing! I especially loved the writing style and the plot grabs you - the suspense was just right! There were a few spelling mistakes but they were otherwise minor. Other than that, I'm so happy to have read this."
Lots of potential here!
"This is a very intriguing book, with lots of vivid descriptions. The narrator is by far the strongest aspect of this book and having read the first 3 chapters only, I want to read more to see you you advance it. Slightly too much exposition, but then again, that is part and parcel of epic fantasy like this. Tighten up the grammar and punctuation and you have a formidable work on your hands."
The argheens
"Your creation of the supernaturals I near flawless. Good job."
Needs work
"I am only three chapters is, but unfortunately, the grammar and punctuation is making it very difficult for me to focus and enjoy the story properly. I would highly recommend the website Grammarly.com to help with that. There is a free version that can help with a lot of the issues that you have. From what I read so far it does seem like an interesting plot, but it also feels like everything was just mixed together all at once that it is difficult to truly understand just what the goal actually is. The same goes for the protagonists starting with one name and then having to go by a fake one. My recommendation for this is to have the characters call themselves by their aliases in public, but keep their original names for the reader. I actually had to jump back to the first character to remember who Emmanuel and Janora were. Again, this is an interesting start, but it is very difficult for me to follow with so many grammar mistakes. Still, I will look forward for any updates done in the future."
Lot of Potential
"I haven't finished the entire book, but just from the first four and a half chapters I can get a pretty good idea of what is positive and what really needs work. By far the biggest issue is the grammar and spelling; there are a lot of run-on sentences and misspellings which are so common that they undermine the entire story. This is kind of sad, though, because the story is fairly interesting and compelling. The characters need a bit more work to make them more memorable and interesting, and the development is mostly given through narration, but there is enough going on to give me a decent idea of what these people are like (again, I haven't finished the entire book, so I can't say much on the character development right now, I'm just basing it on what I've already read). The narrator has a unique and interesting voice, and could come to serve as a defining part of the writing if the technical issues weren't present, There is a lot of creativity in this also, something which is crucial to creating a good fantasy; I'd say the author does that well enough already, although at times it can feel very overwhelming with the amounts of exposition in both the dialogue and the narration. Again, take my review not as one of the whole book, but of the first four chapters. It should be a four star book, but I give it three stars, just because, again, the technical problems here are simply too distracting that I struggle to fully appreciate the story. In summary, there's a lot of potential here, but for it to be realized, there's be a lot of editing to be done."
