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Great story

"Really itching to complete this one..."

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WOW!

"This book is so awesome. I hated that it didn't end in a way I would've loved, but would be nice to know if there's a second book to it."

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awesome

"This story was well written, I was captivated from the start. but I was also disappointed in the ending. It simply ending too soon with too may unanswered questions. Seems like I was just drawn into the story and it abruptly ends leaving one sad and angry. I will say that the story in itself was well written and everything fell into place. I just think that there was so much more to be told. It was like watching a promotional view of a newly released movie and leaving you wanting more to see where it leads. Only this isn't a short review of the book to get you interested but the full book. If a sequel then it is a great book but without it I am afraid it is a story without a clear ending."

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Loved everything about this book

"Fell in love with this books characters and it's story line. I was amazed with the way this author described things and the world in which she created I wish people really did get special gifts at 16 I'd kill to be a Mermaid like... Can't say the name. But if you like paranormal romance this is a book you should read. You can also buy the full book on Amazon"

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Ok ty alot of

"Ok ty lots and i got "

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You call this a gift?!

"Good story, I just wish the ending was better"

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You Call This a Gift?

"I am surprised with the ending. Truthfully, I had expected the story to continue as I really felt that the author had reaches a road block with this book. Few grammar mistakes were also spotted..."

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You call this a gift ?

"The book shows its complete but the last chapter does not make any sense.. What happened to Jonah? Who pulled him away from Anna... Is there any book 2 or is this the end.. If this is the end then it's not actually making sense..The book is good if it's continued by adding more chapters or by making a 2nd book.. I don't like that this book is ending like this.. "

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