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Excellent fanfiction

"This Harry Potter mix is quite a good one. I enjoyed reading it and seeing the story from a new point of view. The tie-in with the actually book events is very good."

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Gorgeous

"This is nothing like some of the past fanfics I've read! It's written like it's own work unlike most fanfics that draw heavily on their inspired works. And the lifestyles you describe are so fashionable it makes me wish I lived Ava's life. Especially with all the details you put into her clothing! Oh and her mother (I don't like her) but you describe her dresses so well, I can see her clearly in my head! You describe scenes so well and I love how you put ava as an onlooker in situations that are described so well in JKR's book. I can only wish that you finish this series fast because I want to see Draco and Ava together!!!"

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