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Somethings out there.

"My second time reading this, and I still enjoyed it. The characters and plot are really good and it's well written. Well done author.👏👏👏"

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Mbali

"I liked how Jerk resolve the issue, and his bravery saved the little girl and he mum's life. The story was readable and enjoyable, and I would love to read more stories like this on. Author must keep up the good work"

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An Amazing story

"The story had its Moments it was really hilarious and suspenseful at times. Overall, the story was amazing the plot was so good. it basically was about jakes demons coming to life and killing people because he cheated on his wife, he regretted it so much that his demons came alive, and they fed on his guilt. The Place being a gas station wasn't the best place to put the story I would have done somewhere else but overall, it was so amazing loved it. it Also had parts that were sort of hard to get into. But if there was more, I So recommend more to it. amazing job"

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This needs to be a Movie

"I loved the development this movie takes with Jake, and who his goal came full circle at the end just as he hoped. And the suspense of will they survive or not with that thing was immaculate. I loved how the author described the scenes and gave the emotion to everyone in the situation. Just the perfect October short story read. I highly recommend."

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Love

"I love this story"

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Something’s out there

"A very good book. Love it. The suspense was worth it. It all came together in the end. Am glad Jenna and Clara survived. "

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Nice 👍

"Nice story it was like watching a horror movie. Good author"

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So good! But...

"I love the book! It's really detailed, however I wish that the story was much longer. This only took me about 20 minutes to read. I wish that this book would've lasted me an hour at best. Amazing book though! You should totally make a part two. :)"

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Good

"It's a nice story line. S"

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Amazing!

"It was honestly amazing and i wish i found something like this earlier"

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something's out there

""Wow, just wow. I haven't been this thrilled by a story in years! The way the author slowly builds tension and suspense is masterful. I found the story too good to read."

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somethings out there

"great little story. had kind of "the mist" feel to it, but you made it your own. pain is something that can wreak havoc in so many ways. i love the ending where he realizes that this is his demon. it killed the others to magnify his own pain and grief. hes been living in his own hell since his family died and his demon came to collect. thank you for sharing."

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A Great Horror Story

"I love horror books and stories; I believe that one is a new favorite to my growing list of horror books. You told your story wonderfully. I would love to read more of your writings."

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something´s out there

"Wow Amazing. "

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Something's Out There

"Very exciting!! Loved it"

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My personal opinion about the story

"I Liked this story was surprising, and I recommend it. "

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Something's out there

"Second time i've read this and I still enjoyed it! The story is ripe for sequels but please let the good win!"

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Something's out there

"I have commented to the author. A good gory horror. Fast moving. Action packed. No time to take a breather. Sad ending but it was the obvious ending given the storyline. I recommend this to friends who like horror and will read more from this author."

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Something's out there

"This story had me gripped from the very beginning, you never know what was coming next, full of terror, full of suspense, I absolutely loved this story bring on more !!!!"

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SUP MOTHERFUCKERSSS

"100/10!!!"

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