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Beta turned luna

"Wait a second 🙋🙋🙋 how can this be the end when the story is j starting to get excited 🤷🙎👨‍👩‍👧‍👦so please continue the story 🙏🙏🙏🙏💞💞💞💞😘😘💯💯💯"

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Good, could be better

"Bunch of minor mistakes, like too instead of to, and other things that could be fixed with a quick edit reading. "

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"Couldnt stop until I finished reading the entire novel. You can broaden your audience by publishing your story on NovelStar Mobile App."

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Beta turned Luna

"I really enjoyed reading this story."

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Love it

"I really enjoyed the story, I started it this afternoon and just finished it like 5 hours later. Great story."

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Beta turned luna

"It was a great story just to short but it was really good I like that the woman in the story was strong and knew what she wanted"

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Beta Turned Luna

"This book is fantastic. I absolutely love it."

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From beta to Luna

"Good book to read a few mistakes but easily sorted as I understand what you were meaning "

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Beta turned luna

"I like that the story is being told from more than one person. "

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Beta turned Luna

"Omg i love this story hopefully there is a second one I cant wait to see how that one turns out 😁"

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Beta turned Luna

"OMG where to start! This story is the best! There's love, hate,fighting there's so much in just a short story. I don't understand how one person can make much an interesting book! I would definitely recommend this story! The characters were well described and the plot was fantastic"

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Loved it

"Loved this story "

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Betta turned luna

"Very interesting loved it"

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Perfect

"The fact that this was your first book, you really did good at Beta turned Luna. That was so nice. I loved this book. It really was interesting. "

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Amazing book

"I loved the book I read the hole book I would recommend everyone to read this book the wording was good no problems with the wording over all I really enjoyed reading the book"

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Need more

"I am completely hooked I need more "

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Bata turned Luna

"I love the book I hope it continues "

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OOOOHH MYYYY GOOOOD

"I LOVED THIS STORY SOOO MUCH..........its was a happy story hopfully theirs more to it befor it ends good job author👏👏👏👏👏👏💖💖💖💜💜💜"

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What a lovely story

"Is there a book two"

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Beta turned Luna

"Love this story"

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