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a boy loses his little brother.

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Summary

A Boy is about to lose his little brother. A 15-year-old boy is about to lose his 8-year-old little brother to a Ghost.

Genre
Horror,Mystery
Author
Grace
Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Babysitting His Little Brother.

It was on a clear evening in a town called Indianapolis Falls, on that evening, a 5'11', short brown hair, hazel eyes, wearing underwear, shorts, shirt, 15-year-old boy named James Michael Pierce was in his bedroom, doing his homework, when someone sneaked up.

"BOO!!, Ha I Scared You", a voice said until James found out that it was his 4'4', short light brown hair, light brown eyes, wearing underwear, shorts, shirt, 8-year-old little brother named Ryan Kenneth Pierce.

"Ryan, I'm going to get you!!", James said.

"Mommy, James is chasing me again", Ryan replied as he ran off.

Until James ran into their 5'9', Shoulder Length blonde Hair, blue eyes, wearing under-wear, bra, shorts, shirt, 37-year-old mother named Jeanette Julie Pierce.

"James stop chasing your little brother", Jeanette said.

"OK Mom", James replied.

another hour later Jeanette and Joshua Blake Pierce was going out for the night, leaving James to look after his little brother.

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