What is your opinion?
I understand how people can read a book in one sitting
"I generally understand how some people can sit down and read a book in one sitting because I almost done that. Its good work "
Good
"Nice story "
BLOOD
"I LIKE THE PLOT AND THE STORY IS AMAZING"
Needs an update,
"I love it! But I’m so eager to know what will happen!"
I don’t understand what JK really wants
"I’m kinda lost if jk likes her or not... what does he really want? And who bit her?? When did this happen? And how no one saw it before??"
Blood
"Loving the storyline please continue at your own pace "
Great story. (critic)
"First, it's a good start. But you need to improve more and i see no emotions. Overall the storyline is good and the plot is good. I love unsolve mysteries and this is making my head very swayed on how you write. It seems you have some strong points on parts and some weak points. Keep the good work. God bless!"
Love it
"I love it so much"
Blood
"I like the bickering part of all the characters involved but I don't dislike anything about the book. I haven't thought of anyone to recommend it to. Question to the author: are you going to write any update on any of your books especially this one or are you abandoning all of it to contemplate on getting better first mentally before resuming to write anything?"
Little confusing
"It’s a good book but grammar is not good. Which make it difficult to read. I have to read same lines 2 to 3 times to makes sense who is saying what "
Improve for success! (Constructive Criticism)
"The story seems cliché and progresses way too quickly. There are also some spelling and tenses errors, other than repetitive sentences. If these “mild” errors were to be fixed though, I think that the quality of the story would drastically improve. By doing so, the reading of this would be much more pleasant. "
