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Dlm

"Interesting. Teen age years. Lol"

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Good

"I loved the story so far but i think u should've mentioned at the beginning that this isn't complete :( i want to read more"

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Bad bay

"Good so far"

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Amazing!!!! 🤩🤩🤩

"I loved everything and I chose this rating because your such an amazing and bright writer and honestly I could never write like this.... this motivates me to do my best because this story has all of my attention. "

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this

"i like everything that had been written"

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Intriguing and I love how the story unfolds gradually at the right pace with both Sam's and Aaron's pov

"Intriguing and I love how the story unfolds gradually. My favorite is when Aaron tended to Sam when she was ill and her sassy lil sis was just a great character (:"

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Interestiing

"Wait. This story is on Dreame???? I had never seen it on there"

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Very captivating

"Really enjoying this book "

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Hmmmm.....lovely

"A good read"

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After school with Mr Obnoxious

"This is a worthy read. Not a typical teen bubblegum story. The character development is honest. I have to give the author the applause deserved."

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Great story

"I feel so bad for Chloe I hope everything works out for her. You are a great writer! Keep up the good work! "

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Last chance

"I love everything. Let me read "

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My review

"I really liked the story overall I liked how it wasn’t cheesy like other books , when they get together and live happily ever after . I like how you waited to the end to actually get them together , and I like how you kept us guessing with how the story would turn out , for example about the fake pregnancy I believe many of us thought that Sam would actually be pregnant in the end but you proved us wrong , and also you shocked me when one of the characters chloe had died . But all in all I fell in love with this story !"

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Love the story love the characters

"Love the story love the characters. The author could do with paying attention to the spelling and grammar. The further along it gets it reads like it's rushed."

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Loved it!

"I loved the book. All of the ups and downs had me hooked. The grammar was a bit messy at times but I still loved the book! The author did great!"

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Love!!!

"I loved it!!!"

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Mr Obnoxious

"Cute story. Cried hard over chloe, ty."

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Good

"I liked the whole story except that Chloe died. And also it would have been better if you gave some details about Dean's life you know. But overall story is good."

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After school with mr obnoxious

"Great book fun to read with heartbreaking moments that made me feel the pain of the characters as if i was there myself "

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Its complicated

"I was different than what I imagined it would be. Refreshing, after all the ones I normally read on here. "

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