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Love this!

"I found this story here and I remembered it from wattpad but was not completed...looking forward to seeing where it goes!"

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Something real

"I liked the fact that he gave her time to heal, but I also hate the fact that he abandoned her. No communication is hard in any type of relationship. Which can lead to bitterness and resentment."

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Love it

"Love the character book is very interesting"

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Something real

"I love the plot and execution of the book. I would recommend it to my Facebook friends and family to read. I love all her friends especially brotherly Zane. Can't wait to see what happens next"

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Something real

"Love the story is there a way you can include pictures of the characters and places that they go."

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Good story

"I like the character development and plot. I enjoy how realistic the characters personalities are. Could use some proofreading for grammar, but other than that it’s a great read. Please finish as soon as you can. "

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Good

"I really like the start so far, I wish there was mor chapter and it looks like the author is on a bit of an updating break which is disappointing "

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so good

"this story is so good it almost had me believing in love so good you should read it"

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Something Real

"Can't wait to see what's next!! I love their relationship and how the friends interact. "

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Great story!

"Soo like the story! Looking forward for updates!"

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Great story!

"I cant wait to read more!"

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Great Story

"Please continue the story. I want to know if Mia and Conner get together. Did Liam start dating Lisa? Who is the guy that Liam is seeing/dating? What was the punishment for Zane’s wife after she messed up 4 times in one day????? Are Zane and his wife into BDSM?????"

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Something real

"I’m enjoying this so much can’t wait for the next chapter "

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Good, book, everything is on point so far,would love to see the end of the story

"Tremendous job, story I flowing well, good grammar, am impressed, it's very fresh and would love to read till the end. Good job"

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Something Real

"To many small grammar mistakes but other than that a good story can't wait for the completed book"

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hey

"its great love the book"

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Please update..

"I love the story please update "

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Something real

"Great story line"

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Some thing real

"The story is ok I am totally loving the Mia character she reminds me of Madea always has her guns locked and loaded. Conner seems interesting I am looking forward to see how the story grows."

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