Overall interesting( prey is mentioned too many times in first paragraph tho,)

"I like the idea, the characters really pop out of the pages.. ( well, screen...) And ways that you can improve on are....... Hmmm..... Let me think... I can't thing of any way! I recommend this to anyone who likes an action story. BTW, this is ambitious, but could you check out my book? It's called the Unforgettables 💕"