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War in heaven

"The book is really interesting and I had fun reading it I would recommend it to my friends and family because it's literally so good I chose this rating because I feel like the writer deserves it for writing such a masterpiece "

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Krux

"Great story"

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Kyla

"This is an excellent book. Thank you for sharing. I do hope you post more books and I would love to read more on kyla"

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War in Heaven

"I love this book!! At first the amount of characters seemed like a lot, but I generally started to get it more and keep them straight. A few grammatical errors. But this book is like nothing else I have read. The idea is really cool. The author has built an entire universe that I love reading about and it can honestly open a new idea. I want to see how the characters pan out with each other. Please put up the sequel(s). "

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Amazing amazing loved it so so much

"Please please i need to know what happens next your truly an amazing writer .everything you wrote was a amazing a breath of fresh air amazily extremely so so much awesome ."

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Splendid

"The write up is so splendid and original. Gives us another look of why Lucifer (Lucius) fell from heaven."

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Quite a Ride

"The author has a great imagination! The world they're painting is very intriguing. The nitty gritty; one of the things that kept pushing me out of the story were regular 'almost' word choices. 'stocks' when they meant 'stalks', 'too' for 'to', 'minor' for 'miner', 'wondering' for 'wandering.' Like notes on a violin that are almost correct...outside of this the grammar/punctuation was pretty good. On a broader scale, the one thing I struggled with, which is common for up-and-coming writers, is how much of the story was Told to me rather than Shown. I wanted to hear the first chapter's Main Character interacting with her coworkers, rather than being told she didn't fancy them. So much of the world could have been Shown rather than Told, and would result in the already very intriguing world being so much richer. Please keep writing!"

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Different and Interesting

"I’ve not read that much but so far the story is original and enticing. A different take on the apocalypse that’s not cliche at all."

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