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What is your opinion?
Good
"There were some major plotholes in the story, but it seemed promising, so I'd like you to fix them accordingly. The grammar can be improved, and you can put in more characterization in the characters other than the protagonist."
the fighter
"It's a great story so far"
Great story
"This story was very good kept me wanting to read it more!"
The Fighter
"I love this story so far. The book isn't as great as it could be though, I believe it could be greater, if you could add more chapters and correct some of the grammar this story could be more than great, but so far its good."
