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Much appreciated

"Such a fascinating story with interesting characters"

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nz

"i like it"

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u nice!

"overall i love ur book and id recommend it but there are some grammar mistakes...if english is not ur first language ,i totally understand,u can download grammarly https://www.grammarly.com/ other than that,both u and ur book are amazing! u nice keep going!-PJM btw whats the girls name(the girl who got kidnapped by dylan)"

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Cruel Billionaire

"I liked the descriptive of the characters although it needed more detail about the plot of the story.I rated it on the scale I thought it deserved and I would recommend it to a more mature audience."

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Great

"Ii like the book but ii saw some errors while reading and also is there book 2 of this novel but all in all it is a good novel"

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Intresting

"I was really enjoying the story, I think it need to continue as it sounded unfinished. I read the story for just one day it was really great thank you"

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😒😔😔😔😔

"How could he be so cruel to her"

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Perfectly

"Awsome 😍😍"

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Frustrating love

"I believe the guy love this girl, but he is insane and crazy nature. Yo will feel so much frustration with the main character and how she cover the all situation, just how many woman in real life."

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Ilham Mohammed

"I like the story. It is interesting to read but a lot of mistakes are found while reading but good story so far and this is the first story I read after installing the app so this story makes me like the whole app. To the author; good job . Youcould make it better by correcting the spelling and grammar mistakes"

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cruel billonaire

"Could not stop reading it from page one. The plot of this guy doing everything he can to control and abuse her for his own warped thinking is compelling. The way each character's actions are predictable but not predictable keeps the flow of words continuing from page to page. Seen through Meera's eyes, the author keeps the reader locked into every word. The only thing I may change would be shorten the length a couple of pages here and there. Otherwise the ending befits the entire work."

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Super like love the story

"I like the flaw of story to the point i almost cried coz i feel the pain and ache she felt but later dylan switch his mode and show he really care. "

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Are you going to finish the story

"I really like this and I really hope they stay together they really each they don’t want to meant it. I glad that he found out she was pregnant and glad that he was able to feel the baby kick "

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Cruel.billionqire

"Interesting story"

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Cruel billionaire

"I like the story. I wonder how is it going to end."

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Running away from billionaire

"I thought it's complete but it's not"

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Curel Billionaire

"god!! I can't wait for the next chapter, please upload fast!!!!!"

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Cruel Billionnaire

"I got really hooked since the beginning. You have begun your book with an interesting chapter which made me want to read more of it. I really love how the plot is developing and I can’t see how it will turn out in the end. I hope you upload more chapters and keep up the amazing work! "

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Interesting❤

"My review is long overdue but I was waiting for more chapters to be released😊😍I have read and I must say you have great imaginative skills, keep it up, you're brilliant💗❤"

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Good job

"You did an amzing job with the plot. I is very interesting. Keep on updating and writing."

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