Elle

. “The story must strike a nerve in me. My heart should start pounding when I hear the first line in my head. I start trembling at the risk.” — Susan Sontag

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Great Start

I like the flow of the story and how easy is it to read. I definitely see potential in the development of the story. Overall I like the writer's style and can't wait to read more. Keep it up!!

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Good job

You did an amzing job with the plot. I is very interesting. Keep on updating and writing.

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Must read!!

I feel in love with your story and couldn't stop reading. Everything is well described and so intriguing. Well done. Keep writing, can't wait for more!

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Amazing

I love everything about this story. Amazing plot. Keep it up

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Interesting

Great story. There are some grammatical errors here and there but overall it's good. Keep it up!!

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Great Start

I love everything there is to love about it. I like that is it so poetic. Amazing writing style.
Good job keep it up!

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Can't wait to read more..


I like everything about this story. It is very interesting so far. I love the plot and the flow is perfect. Great writing style. Keep it up. Hope you update soon.

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Good start

I like thale story so dar. But I would go into more detail. Interesting storyline. Keep it up!

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Simply amazing

One word to describe this book would be - Perfect. It keeps me wanting to read more and more. I love every aspect of this book. Great writing style. Keep writing.

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Very Interesting

I enjoy reading the story. I like the fact that the characters are very very intriguing. I like your writing style and can't wait to read more!
Keep it up!

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Good Start

I like the fact that she didn't give up to find her grandfather. However, I would like to read these char after more n details. Overall, I like the plot. Can't wait to read more!!

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Great start

I like the fact of how you captured the sad emotions. I make want to read more and some of us readers we can relate to. I love that you show thee vulnerability of the characters.

I can't wait to read more. Keep it up.

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Simply Amazing

I really like the fact that you kept the characters raw and down to earth throughout the story. I have to admit that I cried several times while ready it Overall, you captured every element perfectly. Keep it up!

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Great book

I like the fact that it straight forward. It lets you imagine everything little detail. The emotions are what got me hooked.

Please keep updating.

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Good job

I like both characters. The story is interesting. Good writing style. Overall Pretty good. Keep updating!

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Great job!

Great job, keep updating.
I like the fact that we are kept on iur toes, from one chapter to another.

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