Elle

Good job

You did an amzing job with the plot. I is very interesting. Keep on updating and writing.

Must read!!

I feel in love with your story and couldn't stop reading. Everything is well described and so intriguing. Well done. Keep writing, can't wait for more!

Amazing

I love everything about this story. Amazing plot. Keep it up

Interesting

Great story. There are some grammatical errors here and there but overall it's good. Keep it up!!

Great Start

I love everything there is to love about it. I like that is it so poetic. Amazing writing style.
Good job keep it up!

Very Interesting

I enjoy reading the story. I like the fact that the characters are very very intriguing. I like your writing style and can't wait to read more!
Keep it up!

Good Start

I like the fact that she didn't give up to find her grandfather. However, I would like to read these char after more n details. Overall, I like the plot. Can't wait to read more!!

Great start

I like the fact of how you captured the sad emotions. I make want to read more and some of us readers we can relate to. I love that you show thee vulnerability of the characters.

I can't wait to read more. Keep it up.

Simply Amazing

I really like the fact that you kept the characters raw and down to earth throughout the story. I have to admit that I cried several times while ready it Overall, you captured every element perfectly. Keep it up!

Great book

I like the fact that it straight forward. It lets you imagine everything little detail. The emotions are what got me hooked.

Please keep updating.

Good job

I like both characters. The story is interesting. Good writing style. Overall Pretty good. Keep updating!