Elle
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. “The story must strike a nerve in me. My heart should start pounding when I hear the first line in my head. I start trembling at the risk.” — Susan Sontag
Must read!!
I feel in love with your story and couldn't stop reading. Everything is well described and so intriguing. Well done. Keep writing, can't wait for more!
Read the story nowInteresting
Great story. There are some grammatical errors here and there but overall it's good. Keep it up!!
Read the story nowGreat Start
I love everything there is to love about it. I like that is it so poetic. Amazing writing style. Good job keep it up!
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I enjoy reading the story. I like the fact that the characters are very very intriguing. I like your writing style and can't wait to read more! Keep it up!
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I like the fact of how you captured the sad emotions. I make want to read more and some of us readers we can relate to. I love that you show thee vulnerability of the characters. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up.
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I really like the fact that you kept the characters raw and down to earth throughout the story. I have to admit that I cried several times while ready it Overall, you captured every element perfectly. Keep it up!
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I like the fact that it straight forward. It lets you imagine everything little detail. The emotions are what got me hooked. Please keep updating.
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I like both characters. The story is interesting. Good writing style. Overall Pretty good. Keep updating!
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You did an amzing job with the plot. I is very interesting. Keep on updating and writing.
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