Saw her in the Mirror
The best thing about being a writer is that once one tells a story it is theirs, and once they are done with it and happy with it then that can be that!
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This story had a nice style, very imaginative plot and though not a lot of back and forth dialogue, some great characters....
As in most stories, there is always room for improvement, more character development, descriptions,tweak her and there... And not that I am saying this is the case here, for i did find it a good read down a path of horror,
but I know that 5 years ago I wrote a story I was completely happy with, until I reread it a month ago and suddenly reading it fresh like that, found a new angle and began a rewrite.
As a writer, I would be very proud and happy with this effort, and encourage anyone interested in a good horror genre read to give it a go!