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"I'm impressed. It immediately got my attention. There are a few grammatical issues, a missing period - etc. However, the style is great and the lead up to the next chapter has me wanting more."
"I'm impressed. It immediately got my attention. There are a few grammatical issues, a missing period - etc. However, the style is great and the lead up to the next chapter has me wanting more."