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What is your opinion?

Jessie

"A nice, sweet story. A few spelling mistakes here and there, but nothing major. I liked it"

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I was hooked.

"I read the whole thing in one day, because I wanted to see how it would end. Almost like watching a movie really. Few errors, but no one's perfect. Well done author. ✨"

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So sweet

"This was such a sweet short story. Thank you and I really enjoyed reading this book."

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Jessie

"It's too good 👍 "

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Great story

"I am enjoying this story. Can’t wait to see what Jessie decides ."

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Jessie

"A sweet short story!"

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"Almost like an old west story"

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Good Story

"I absolutely LOVE this book, I love the plot and everything about this!! I highly recommend it. want you to know, there is a competition happening this April on the NovelStar app, I hope you can consider You can also publish your stories in there, just email our editors [email protected], [email protected], or [email protected]. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html"

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Jessie

"It is am amazing book, I can't put it down, I need to know how things will end up between Jessie and John"

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Jessie

"It's a lovely story. I have never read story like this. It is sweet and romantic and the plot is very unique. I love the way you have described the countryside. Great work."

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Jessie

"Short, sweet, and awesome. Love the story and the plot. Few grammatical errors but ignorable. Nice romantic story no erotic scenes. Recommend it to everyone. "

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Really good

"Very sweet story❤️"

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Beautiful

"Beautiful love story, glad it all worked out for Jessie & John x"

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Jessie

"I'm so addicted. I love all the characters. And I love that you get what both John and jessie are feeling. A few errors but not a lot. "

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Simpl

"Beautifully written! Short, on point and lovely. N makes ur dsy lovely too.. "

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Jessie

"I loved the whole story line. It was so sweet. Wish I could read more about their life together! ❤️"

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Jessie

"I’m struggling to get a sense of the time period"

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Jessie

"It was so good I almost feel robbed it was over so soon. The story was beautifully laid out, with attention to detail in a short space of time. I loved how you artistically created a portal and allowed me to journey with you on this amazing book. Well done!!"

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Awwwwww

"Such a sweet story I really loved it a lot. I am secretly hoping for a bonus chapter of their wedding and maybe a pregnancy since they didn’t use protection 😍"

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Jessie

"I'm enjoying every word. This is a good book. Every book that I have read from you has been great. They are all page Turner's. Keep up the good work.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤❤❤❤❤❤😊"

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