Brilliant

"It surprised me that she was only fooling him and I think that's a better way to end than the one I was expecting. It twisted what I thought of it. You really built the tension up well, with the little notes on how she had been raised and with her plans and then when the man came home that scene was great The personality of the woman was really maintained well. I think it's tricky to pick a tone like this and stick with it the whole way through but you did it brilliantly. . This is a bit more of a pet peev on my part but I don't think you need 'the end' at the end of the story. The end is for fairytaless and this story leaves on such a good note of impact it takes away from that. Anyway I loved this, I enjoyed this character and seeing justice done to the man."