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I made It!

"I love this story, and Kayls. Amazing person, amazing story. But, sometimes she frustrates me with the plot twists and foreshadowing. I think that sentence said it all, this story has absolutely amazing plot. These usually undeveloped or minor characters really come to life in this well written AU fic, we really get to see them from every angle possible. This story has always got you at the edge of your seat, and Kayls will never cease to amaze you with her amazing writing skills. As a result the wonderfully developed characters and the roller coaster of a plot will have you up all night, whether you are laughing, crying, or squealing worse than a child of Aphrodite."

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PureBrilliance

"this has to be one of the most unique ideas i have seen in such a long time, i just love everything about it, it is so creative and different. Never have i seen anyone attempt a non Percabeth fic and do a Poseidon/Sally fic, it is just so clever and original, well done. i am looking forward to more that will come."

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Worthwhile

"Hey, my best friend recommended this story and told me that i had to review and vote for it because it was that unique and me being me, i didnt believe her so i come to this site and i eat her words. This is by far the most unique PJO fic i have ever read, i havent ever seen anything creative and like this in all of my life. It was brilliant and I absolutely adore it, i really can't wait to read more because this is so amazing. The uniqueness is that incredible and anyone who reads this will find going through the process of joining Inkitt worth it just to review and read this story. Congrats, you floored me with your creativity."

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Wonderful Idea

"This idea is so unique, i absolutely love this fic, so creative and well planned out. wonderful job. I have never found such a unique PJO fic before and i just absolutely adore this cause it is so different and their aint nothing like it out there. Well done."

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SecretlyAddictedtoPJO Loves You Girl

"dude, all the best, took a long time to get my shit together and vote but i promised i was gonna do it and i am, This fic is incredible, I am so happy for you girl, you are an amazing writer and this fic is just incredible, all the best girlfriend."

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Good Luck from xThe Prophecy of Sevenx

"Dude, i wish you all the best of luck, i know you will be awesome. dude, i am routing for you all the way girlfriend, all the best. This fic is one of my top favourite fics so i can't wait for the next update, good luck girlfriend."

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Best romance pjo au ever

"this story is the best percy jackson and the olympians au ever grammar is realy good ı only saw 3 mistakes in the entire story and let me tell you ı started reading this story moment 1 chap.got uploaded and ı still read and author is my friend ım sure ı can say this because ı see this author as my friend ı love your fanfiction and ı love the way you write your story's because you write your story with all of your hearth and let me tell ya you have A BİG hearth thats way you will be my favorite author until Iam unable to read you are my favorite writer that always warmed my hearth by responding my rewiews every time ı send a rewiew,you are the best author for me and most importantly you are my FRİEND you are the friend that always made me laugh even in my worst days thats why you are the best author no one of the best person ı have seen in my short life you will be one my best firends and and a great person Michaela :)"

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iluvboooks

"DUDE THIS IS AMAZING!!! I LOVE THIS STORY WAY TO MUCH!!! HAHHAHAHAHA... it has an amazing plot. and it gets the feels moving... you have an awesome talent! you will win!!! I think this story will be voted on a lot. I love it so much. I will support you for this! :D HAHA"

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