Mumbled Glance

"For some reason " ... one last mumbled glance ..." really got me. Very nice juxtaposition! I was right there in line with that boy exchanging a final unspoken eyebrow raise. I usually am not a fan of the second person but Leah Gray made this work quite nicely. It helps, I think, that it is one brief interlude in this woman's day; nothing earth-shaking actually happens TO her but everyone can relate with her. Well done."