Good work!

"This is a very cool plot! I really like the characters and how well you fleshed them out! I also enjoyed the fact that it’s at MIT which is a school that doesn’t get much fiction (at least from what I’ve seen) my only critique: writing from a men’s perspective can be hard! But remember to use a little more emotion when describing things :) you don’t want him sounding robotic! He seems to be very analytical but I would like to see more charm from him! He sounds like a very handsome guy ;) "