What is your opinion?
Great short story!
"This was a great little piece. It set a mood and scene immediately from the start. There is plenty here to get a full story, yet enough questions to hope that it is expanded on someday. I look forward to (and hope) that we get to learn more about the world briefly revealed here! Nice job!"
A quiet and heroic story
"The forgiveness that is displayed in the story is amazing. I really loved the ending. It's amazing, again, how much you manage to fit into these short stories, and I feel like each one has something important to say. You did a great job of setting the scene and building up to things so that I was never quite sure what was going to happen. I wondered what position the man who taught the girl the dark arts was in before he ended up in prison though. Some sort of teacher or official? Or was he a prisoner when he taught her? I would have liked to know more about what when down in that relationship. Other than that, it was amazing! Great work!"
r u god
"dank story man, honestly 11/10. dank thing to read to when ur hi, overall 11/10 mane. do you have kik? i would like to message u on there, u can be my personal coach, i want to be like the great author bill cosbo."
AMAZING
"YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB!!!!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE ITTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU DID AN GREAT JOB! I LOVE THE STORY AND I HOPE I CAN WRITE AS AMAZING AS YOU DO. GREAT JOB! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):):):):):):):)"
yas
"I found it nice. job. nice it ws. saw nicey. it was nicey. I think you're knead gooder grammer. just kidding, you did great. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) P:) :) L) :) :) P) ): ) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) ;) :) :) :) :) :) :)"
beautiful
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If I am being honest...
"If I am being truly honest of your story, I only have a few critiques that will definitely assist you in your future writing. First and foremost, I hate white people. That's about it."
