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The First Princess of HELL.

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Summary

One Angel, One Devil, one Human. Three individuals , One heart. Who'd she end up with?

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
18
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

"How many times do i have to save you?" I said storming inside the great room in which JAMES lived. Well, he is my best friend and to be honest he is nothing but a headache.

"I am sorry!! but i just could not stop myself from visiting earth". He replied in sad tone.

"What is it that you see there? What attracts you so much that you are ready to accept any punishment given to you by diety?".I said getting angrier as seconds passed.

"I don't know! its just that i love seeing their smiles.They have their loved ones with them.They have children. They are so happy LILTH.Humans are blessed.No offence."

"AHHH! You know we are angels and we are not allowed to have feelings. We do what our orders are". I knew i was telling the truth but i did not want him to be sad.

" I know but i.... well its not worthy to fight over this and yes thank you for your kindness".He said with a faint smile.

"But i'm curious what excuse did you make up this time to save your best friend?"

"Well, i told diety that i had seen a beautiful flower from above and i asked you to bring that for me"

"WHATTTT? A FLOWER? you know there are thousands of beautiful flowers in heaven you could choose from and yet you made this excuse?And what did He say?" His eyes getting wide as he suppressed his laugh."

"You should thank me! I saved you and as you know i'm HIS favourite so he forgave you."I said knowing that he was hiding his laugh and i don't know why but i was irritated by it.

"I thanked you once, i will not thank you again." He said as he sat on his bed. A pint of sadness in his eyes.

"I will not leave heaven and visit earth again. I am sorry."

"Its ok" i smiled.

"And can you please stop hanging in the air lilth? Use your legs instead of your wings." He said clearly displeased by the flapping sound of my wings.

"Why use your legs when you can use your wings and even if i had to use my legs i could not because i never learned how how to walk."I said with a look which i could burn him with.

"Plus i know you are jealous.Mine are golden and all of you angel's wings are white and mine are large in size too." I said with a pride warming up my chest.

"Yes! we all know that and that is because when HE made you HE told us that HE made you with all the love in his heart. Not that HE does not care about us or loves us but you, you are his golden angel and that is why you were given golden wings."He averted his eyes as to hide his jealousy.

A sound came vibrating our ears. This was the alarm with which angels were called and all of us went to meet diety in an urgent meeting.

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AAAAAAAHHHHHH. I LITERALLY WANNA SCREAM BUT INTERNALLY BECAUSE IF I SCREAMED EXTERNALLY , EVERYBODY WILL THINK I'VE LOST MY SANITY 😞😞😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥😭😭😭😭😭😭 BUT YOUR STORY LOOKS SOOO GOOD ON INKITTTTT. I WONDER HOW IT'D LOOK ON WATTPAD???!!!!! 🔥🔥🔥😭😭😭

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aaahhh. Thankkksss 💓💓💓

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