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Great!

"Wonderful done! Amazing written and great storyline"

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Loved the story. Nice and creepy !

"I loved the story. Just a few grammatical errors. "

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Creepy but interesting one

" Terror goes down my heart while reading this much creepy story, especially at the last two chapters. It was really thrilling! Keep writing! ..I loved that!"

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Good Horror Story

"Oh wow, very descriptive and very interesting. The red eyes, 20 ft above the road, didn't move just watched, no crickets."

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Good Short Horror

"Really enjoyed the story! The author is great at setting the scene and it's easy to get sucked into the atmosphere created. The characters were great too!"

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A Captivating Story

"I desperately want to know more about the ending because it left me wanting more. Overall, I loved the story it had a good plot, suspense and very intriguing plot. The story premises kept me reading up until the end. Great Job"

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A very good horror story.

"The friction of the characters where dead on. I felt like I was right there with them in every scene. For a horror story there is not much blood in gore. This story relies a lot on having a tense atmosphere that generated fear as you read it. You are just waiting for a monster to jump out and start killing the characters. The author should turn this into a full length novel. "

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The Midnight Road

"Dear Ashley, I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your novel, "The Midnight Road," and I wanted to take a moment to express my heartfelt appreciation for your work. Your storytelling captivated me from the very first page, and I found myself completely immersed in the world you created. The way you crafted the atmosphere of suspense and tension kept me on the edge of my seat throughout the entire journey. Your ability to build tension and suspense is truly remarkable, and I was completely enthralled by the twists and turns of the plot. The characters you created were so vivid and well-developed, each with their own unique personalities and motivations. I found myself rooting for them, cheering them on as they faced the challenges of the midnight road. Your writing has a way of making the reader feel as though they are right there alongside the characters, experiencing every fear and triumph along with them. I also wanted to commend you on your ability to blend horror and suspense with deeper themes and messages. "The Midnight Road" is not just a thrilling tale of survival; it's also a thought-provoking exploration of the human psyche and the darkness that resides within us all. Thank you, Ashley, for sharing your talent and creativity with the world. "The Midnight Road" is a true masterpiece, and I cannot wait to see what you have in store for us next. Warmest regards, "

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Brilliant.

"I'm not fond of short stories. The only ones I have read are those of old, well-known Russian authors. I barely even like any books. But this was brilliant! I liked you didn't get to know much about the creature. I find creatures, especially in horror movies, to be far more scarier when they are not visible. I liked how the amount of description and the means of description were done so well as to be able to picture what was going on without providing unnecessary detail. And I liked how it concluded in such a way that makes you feel relieved but also still curious."

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This is really good!

"Loved the story!!!!! the plot was so compelling!"

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I live this novel but there is alot of spellingerers in the book but I love it thank you

"I like that it is a horror"

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The Midnight Road

"Loved this story. It kept me feeling very tense throughout not knowing what was going to happen next. Really good characters too."

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My Honest Opinion

"Quite an intricate start but either ways this is an awesome book!"

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Pinklady

"This was a great read would love more like this🤪"

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I dont like sheriff absentmindedness

"I like that story. Because the sheriff is my favourite person. But I don't like his absent-mindedness. My mam preferred this story. It's one of the fascinating story to me "

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The Midnight Road

"Creepy indeed but very good and freaky"

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hi

"it good can you ples mack mor books ples"

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Great Horror Read

"Had a good time reading this! The atmosphere was spot-on."

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intriguing

"I loved how interested this kept me!"

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Crazy

"This was a well written story. However, the ending was abrupt and left me feeling like there was unfinished business. This seemed like a good start to a book but I mean the story was well told and creepy enough. It was great you can feel the chills and smell the blood and fear all around them. I hope you will continue this story as it has a great plot and potential for a great horror story. Keep up the good work."

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