What is your opinion?
So far the book is interesting and I have enjoyed reading it. thank t
"The book is interesting and I have enjoyed reading it. Thank you"
Nill
"I like the story and dislike nothing about the story "
My fighter man
"Really loving this book so far can't wait for more xx"
Good
"Keep writing. Your work is too good and happy reads"
Good
"I love brad's character and also ava's. I know how it feels to have crush on somebody for ages. This one is really good! "
Richter
"It is amazingn story .I like stories about hiding love,sport nad making dreams come true.I am giving a five. "
I love it !!
"Best story!"
Im in love
"I love how so far there isn’t any over blown angst. It’s a great book and I’m literally in love with it and it’s characters "
Love the book already :) keep up the good work!
"I really like the book and there’s nothing to dislike! I love the characters. And I will definitely recommend this book to someone :) "
Awsomeee
"Dusro ka pata nhi, but I liked it veryyyyy muchhh😌🤗👌👌"
Ava and Brad
"Love it one of my favorite stories "
Lovely
"update soon looking forward to read them."
i love it
"Meaningful chapters"
Fun, but grammar and style needs work
"There are a lot of basic grammatical mistakes being made consistently which make it difficult to enjoy while reading. I mean, yes I'm a bit of a stickler for certain things, but there are consistent mistakes. I suggest having a native English speaker help the writer correct mistakes. Also, the dialogue feels dry at times. Why do the characters have to always be very thorough with what they say? Why is everything explained to the reader? It takes away the fun of filling in the blanks that comes with reading. "
Jojo
"Its going good"
Ava and Brad
"First two chapters were good! I think the story so far felt like a teenage romance for me. I thought there was some errors nothing can’t get past. Cute book great plot. Keep writing you have potential. "
The fighter
"Waiting to see how Ava and Brad's love story begins..."
My fighter man
"Look forward to reading more 👍🏼"
