On the run

"This story has the potential to be really good but you left out so much (i.e.: the whole story to do with "A" and what was the deal with Mona and Noah?) It seems like this was just an excuse to write about lesbian sex with no background to actually have a plot to make it interesting. Glad it was just a short story. I only finished it because I kept assuming that the background and plot would come out at some point but it never did. There's not even any background on how the 5 girls became friends in the first place."