What is your opinion?
Review
"Great job :)I like the plot and the writer's skills."
Riveting
"Really great writing style. Just a tip: Use your tab and enter key more than you do; it'll help keep your story going, and lowers your chances of boring the reader. Keep writing, though. Would love it if you could look over some of my chapters. Its great to have the perspective of another writer, and I'm relatively new here. Here's the Link: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/action/351232 -Brooke"
Mysterious
"The first chapter is a perfect introduction that makes the reader curious about the story ahead. The plot is interesting, the characters are likeable and overall I did’t feel bored while going through the chapters. It gave an “Indiana Jones” vibe here and there and this is a good sign. Suffice to say that I will keep reading as new chapters will come out. My only advice is to fix the few typos."
Amazing read
"I loved the story,it is different from the cliche romance stories that I have read which include a rather unrealistic way of falling in love and repeated plot lines only with different characters. I am really curious to know what shall happen next. Elena seems like a really soft person and Alex rather cunning in a positive sense. The idea behind connecting time,another world with a spoonful of romance is absolutely wonderful."
Keeps my interest
"I've really enjoyed the story. It has an interesting plot line, and the writer has done an excellent job at keeping the readers intrest. Except for a few oddly worded phrases and a typo, it's practically perfect. "
