Inkitt
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Whoa man! you gave me shivers

"My history with university's essays is still in the make-out phase, 3ed year, 1 to go, and the essays fall more often than rain on my head, and fuck, yes, the anxiety of them increases with each, and the more work you put in each the more you want toy here some comments about it, and NO-ONE, not professor, not a college gives a good feedback, and that frustrates me even more. Awesome story as always man. Keep writing awesome stuff."

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Interesting and Relatable

"I didn't find this story especially scary, but it was an interesting take on anxiety and doubt, and certainly one I can relate to. I also appreciate the use of the 2nd person perspective, it's difficult to use well but I think it was effective here."

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