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Melted Ice

"Im very intrigued. Its the story that matters. The grammer will follow. This comes from your heart. And that is what matters in the end. Please finish the novel. "

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COOL IDEA

"For English not being your first language, I'm really impressed! The plot of the story is still building but it seems really good so far! I'm excited to see where you take this story. :) This idea is really cool. The idea of anything mafia-related is sexy and taboo, so it's really intriguing! Great work... Let me know how I can help or support you at all during your writing process!!"

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Nice

"Nice story "

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