What is your opinion?
Trapped by the Pharaoh
"I like that it's going back in time, also that it's set in Egypt. There isn't much books that I like about Egypt, so I'm glad that I can add this to my favorites in the Egypt category. Ramses is one of my favorite pharaoh's so that's a plus in my book. I wouldn't know who to recommend this book to since none of my relatives are interested in Egypt books and aren't really into online books. I chose this rating because, although I'd love to give it a five star overall, but there are misspellings here and there. We all make them, and I'm not good at judging plots so I couldn't give a five star since I didn't know. That being said, I hope you update soon! - GoldenFlora"
An excellent story
"Wonderful use of imagination!I really like the plot ,it took my attention in the whole time.I think the imagination is the most important treat of an author and you have it in huge quantity.Things like punctuation are important but the plot is much more important for me as a reader :)"
Review
"I liked your story so far!! I will be waiting for your updates There are some errors here and there.: 1- You don't punctuation mainly the commas before the conjugation "and" 2- In chapter 2. You used the word loose instead of lose 3- In chapter 1 I believe: you said: The one who try to interfere ---it should be--> the one who tries This is what I noticed so far ^_^"
Pharaoh
"Very promising and adventurous."
