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Good read

"I liked the story but I couldn’t agree with the core reason for this story. Jack was alone and he wanted a family, he felt almost all women out there want his money only. How he or anyone can decide only by seeing in a mall some random girl for 2mins is perfect and will not be wanting his money. Sarah may also be like others. No one in the world can tell by only seeing one person for 2 mins that, some person will be perfect. If Jack already knew some girl from long time ago and he was sure that she is not materialistic from long term knowledge about that person but she never noticed him, then when he grow up and became powerful kidnapped that girl makes sense. But over all I liked the story.Thanks for sharing."

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The Perfect Plan❤

"This book was definitely worth a read, loved your writing style, enjoyed it. Thankyou for sharing your beautiful work with us, amazingly written💕 "

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Good

"I was a good book definitely would recommend reading it."

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Kidnapped

"Good read. Enjoying the story so far. "

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Speechless

"🙊 Speechless! "

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Very interesting read

"The kidnapping of a loving wife and mother? I was intrigued. For awhile Jack was very persuasive and he kind of grew on me where I was rooting for him. Did not expect the ending! I did not like the bonus section. Not to give anything away but mr black doesn’t deserve happiness. "

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I am being FORCED to wait

"I’ve been checking multiple times a day for more chapters. It’s like waiting for Xmas morning for presents. I do hate Jack because of Adam. Michael might be sweet but I can careless about him. But when Sarah (you) talks/thinks about Jack I find myself forgetting Adam and almost falling for him. I have to keep reminding myself that Jack is evil. "

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Interesting

"This story is very different from the ones I've read so far. I am quite enjoying the it. I am always curious to know what happens in the next chapter. I am impressed by the writing style here. I would definitely recommend everyone to read this story. Good work."

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It is very interesting

"I like how this story have me at the edge of my seat I would recommend this story to my friend I rate this story five stars becaue it is super great"

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The Perfect plan

"The book starts well and looks interesting. We all reach the point where we long for love and passion and caress, even though we have lost our connection with each other, our nature longs for it. I'm intrigued and will definitely read it. Thanks for sharing."

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Good

"Its very interesting and well written. Keep writing."

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Great Writing

"I have been enjoying the story and love your writing style, keep up the good work."

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The perfect plan

"Fascinating story. Sarah's character is infuriating at times she never reacts the way I expect. But that makes the storyline more interesting. Jack's manipulations keep going from bad to worse. Brilliant book hard to put down. I really like this one. Can't wait for more! "

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Good

"Good so far"

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Good

"Good Nice one Fair Good"

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"Sarah don't get emotional"

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Intriguing

"The pase is quite slow, I came from literotica, because I loved the story and wanted to know how it would proceed. Can't wait for the next chapters"

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Good

"Since i am of personality who absolutely detest being force, you can imagine i am not really that ecstatic about Sarah's situation. But the story itself something i have never read before. So it makes me think how i would react if i where forced to be in such an impossible situation. But i hope she could break free from him soon. Coz no amount of sob story can justify what Jack is doing to Sarah. The writing is good and the way it is written is gripping. The author knows how to keep the readers interested."

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Good but slow

"The story is good but very slow moving. Was hoping for more action by now."

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